another haiku on relating

you’re forcing my hand

and it’s beginning to make

my heart start to ache.

About mandycregan

i'm a mom, partner, healer, writer, business owner and dancer.
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2 Responses to another haiku on relating

  1. Cubby says:

    I love the parallelism portrayed in the last 2 lines with the rhyme…similar in sound but different in nature. 🙂

    • mandycregan says:

      thanks– as you are well aware– i tend to stay out of the arena of rhyming– but sometimes even i have gotta give it up to the rhyme– sometimes it’s just begging to be used.

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